Aet Lindling

omg ayra + monki why r u so mean? those are bad reviews and they will hurt gothfirls feellings this is actualy an amazin poem guys why u so mean????????????????????????????????? ...

here's chapter four Four On Trial The police caught the young man, after about an hour-long chase, and brought him into a small building that smelled like eggs. The man ...

Magitech The Tales of Vlora Chapter 1 Vlora Vlora raced down the chrome narrow Switchy switchy. Make it "narrow, chrome" and don't forget the comma! hallway, avoiding crows That's 'crowds', ...

Who's saying they didn't like it? :P Well, you, I guess... They're distinguished critters, they hardly ever don't comment on something. I do, usually, but I can't find much to ...

"Last time he meet" should be "The last time he met" "I sorry, Wolf" should be "I'm sorry, Wolf" “I’m sorry to hear that. But can’t you call me Lethero." ...

The [s]wing[/s] wind stung her eyes as she tried to make it [s]though[/s] through . The house wasn’t more than one hundred feet [s]away[/s] away, but because of the way ...

Ooh, I loved it. ... No, really. No changing here. ... Eeeexcept that "8.45" should be "8:45". And chocoholic, "dryly" is a word, look it up. :P ~Aet

The poem is confusing I know because I wrote it. But it isn't terrible like ya'll said. Its just differnent. I agree on some of the critique but not all. ...

Okay, first off, the grammar. You forget to capitalize "I" in a few places, it seems you do so where there's a contraction. Even you attach "I" to "am" to ...

(my hundredth review, yay.) Okay, first off, like Sumi said, I have no idea why you decided to review your own work. It doesn't really help you improve, and really ...

Alright... firstly, this is crap, and I agree with every point made in all the negative reviews. (yes, I read through them) Oh, especially Fantasyartist. Secondly... You no thats so ...

Pfft. (note that that is not the sound of disgust, but of air escaping lips that are desperately trying to withhold laughter) Pffftsnrklearrrrrg. BWAHAHAHA. For the first time in something ...

"Long ago , there was a battle. At the end of the battle , there [s]was[/s] were so many dead. With life comes death, but also with death comes life. ...

"“Oh yes,” Abby shook her head." Don't you mean "Oh no," here? "But then she woke, and the sky was dead pierced by stars and shadows crawled the streets." Something ...

Hm, it could be a bit longer, but the scene you set was great. "The air whistled as the shards sliced through it and then into the Pilot." Don't capitalize ...