Aet Lindling

The [s]wing[/s] wind stung her eyes as she tried to make it [s]though[/s] through . The house wasn’t more than one hundred feet [s]away[/s] away, but because of the way ...

Ooh, I loved it. ... No, really. No changing here. ... Eeeexcept that "8.45" should be "8:45". And chocoholic, "dryly" is a word, look it up. :P ~Aet

The poem is confusing I know because I wrote it. But it isn't terrible like ya'll said. Its just differnent. I agree on some of the critique but not all. ...

Okay, first off, the grammar. You forget to capitalize "I" in a few places, it seems you do so where there's a contraction. Even you attach "I" to "am" to ...

(my hundredth review, yay.) Okay, first off, like Sumi said, I have no idea why you decided to review your own work. It doesn't really help you improve, and really ...

Alright... firstly, this is crap, and I agree with every point made in all the negative reviews. (yes, I read through them) Oh, especially Fantasyartist. Secondly... You no thats so ...

Pfft. (note that that is not the sound of disgust, but of air escaping lips that are desperately trying to withhold laughter) Pffftsnrklearrrrrg. BWAHAHAHA. For the first time in something ...

"Long ago , there was a battle. At the end of the battle , there [s]was[/s] were so many dead. With life comes death, but also with death comes life. ...

"“Oh yes,” Abby shook her head." Don't you mean "Oh no," here? "But then she woke, and the sky was dead pierced by stars and shadows crawled the streets." Something ...

Hm, it could be a bit longer, but the scene you set was great. "The air whistled as the shards sliced through it and then into the Pilot." Don't capitalize ...

"“What’s so dangerous about seeds?” He asked. Maybe Max was allergic? He wondered." Don't capitalize either "he". "Cant eat fruit.” He said flatly." Ditto here, and add an apostrophe in ...

Yes, she did. I have a confession-- I did too. Saw Paolini and got Eldest signed, too. I just may read Empire (my guess on what it'll most likely be ...

This is a very interesting idea, and I hope you'll post more. Very good storytelling and dialogue too. I... can't find any grammar or spelling errors, and I'm horrible at ...

"Staring Clicked a few buttons and the Highwind zipped into space faster than light." You mean "clicked". Also, you may want to replace this with "tapped" because of this: "Adam ...

"Expelliarmis!" he roared. 'Tis spelled Expelliarmus. with Professor Dumbledoor It's Dumbledore. Now to praise: This is so funny! You need to post more, so I can learn from you for ...